pihu12122010

Please give it a chance.. 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/387873469

RiiInks

Story bhaidya hai but pata hai thoda sa atmosphere aaspaas se environment ko explain karo or feelings ke bare mai thoda sa jyada explain kare dialogues ke bich baki sab sahi hai 

Rainbow_Moon_S

@newbieria kya aap meri v book check kr k feedback de skte ho.
            Please...
            I request you, give my book a try
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