pinkfloydhoe
Survey: What changes would you want to see in the published version of The Father? I’m cutting all of Katherine’s POV except after the shooting, and cutting the time jump from three years to around 9 months… What do y’all think? I finally have time to write again and I’d love some opinions! ❤️
00Tia000
@pinkfloydhoe i think she wasn’t yearning for Micheal I never felt that she loved him as he loved her
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KarMa301
@pinkfloydhoe Do you think you will finish Choices before publishing The Father? I am an Ali/Warren diehard and can't wait to read their HEA!
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TheRealTipsyGypsy
@pinkfloydhoe Love this story, I've honestly read this about 30 times, I swear. Fixing the time gap is good but I already like it as it is. But, what Lena did was a big deal, you can probably edit how it was handled along with story line with Graham.
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