pinkfloydhoe

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You all have been so patient with me. A few of you have personally checked in on me. I’ve really had a shit year, but I’m looking forward to the new year. Some updates on the progress of Betrayal. I’ve cut some things. I’m currently working to shape Dominic’s character more and flesh him out much better than he was. There were so many repetitive thoughts between Ali and Warren that I’ve cut. I’m trying so hard to make it flow together. I’ve lost my spark some over the last few months and I’m trying so hard to get it back. Publishing a book is my dream. I wanna do it right. My love to all of you this holiday season. ❤️

bingbing5119

@pinkfloydhoe happy holidays author. have you ever thought about publishing the father? i kinda want michael immortalized by having a printed book. lolz
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pinkfloydhoe

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You all have been so patient with me. A few of you have personally checked in on me. I’ve really had a shit year, but I’m looking forward to the new year. Some updates on the progress of Betrayal. I’ve cut some things. I’m currently working to shape Dominic’s character more and flesh him out much better than he was. There were so many repetitive thoughts between Ali and Warren that I’ve cut. I’m trying so hard to make it flow together. I’ve lost my spark some over the last few months and I’m trying so hard to get it back. Publishing a book is my dream. I wanna do it right. My love to all of you this holiday season. ❤️

bingbing5119

@pinkfloydhoe happy holidays author. have you ever thought about publishing the father? i kinda want michael immortalized by having a printed book. lolz
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mathwhiz_13

Did you ever think of writing about an FMC who is disgusted by a large age gap (either because of past trauma or can intellectually refute the idea in general) but still ends up in an happily ever after with a MMC with that huge difference? I think writing something outside of your belief system might thicken the plot for further stories

pinkfloydhoe

You know, it’s funny you say that. I’ve thought of having Ali feel that way in Betrayal. Like after everything, realizing, but still loving him. Idk really! 
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pinkfloydhoe

I miss reading everyone’s out of pocket comments so much ❤️❤️ I’ve been working so hard on getting this book published. Thank y’all for being patient ❤️❤️❤️

evol214

@pinkfloydhoe I didn't know you were the one doing the editing yourself. Last time you posted about 'editors get paid well', I thought you actually hired one. Good luck on your editing author, and I'm excited for your book and the rest of choices.
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Mikilynn81

@pinkfloydhoe  yeah I have been, lol I never thought I would get in arguments over books until some negative comments came in Betrayal. Please don't ever doubt yourself you are very talented  when it comes to writing!
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pinkfloydhoe

@Mikilynn81 you’ve always been one of my biggest supporters ❤️❤️ I know I disappear at times but I appreciate the love so much. 
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Sillybeanns

Does anyone know why author took down the 5th book. Think it was on a hiatus? Where the guy is super abusive and makes her crawl? What was it called? killing Me Softly?? 
          
          I am devastated. 

Sillybeanns

@pinkfloydhoe @cutephoto1 
            
            Ohh. I see. Smart. Lots of people get really *silly* about shocking content. I’m also VERY interested in the completion of the story. Happy to purchase for Kindle when author is ready. <3 
            
            Can’t remember if I’ve mentioned before but 
            >>>>AO3<<<<<
            
            Thank you for letting us know, author. <3
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cutephoto1

@pinkfloydhoe thanks for letting us know! If you ever put it back up or post it on another platform we would love to know. I would gladly play $20+ to read it all the way through.
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pinkfloydhoe

@cutephoto1 @Sillybeanns hey guys! I removed that book for now. I’ve been hearing of accounts getting shut down and where that book is so graphic, it’s gonna be gone temporarily. 
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pinkfloydhoe

I need a good fake college name. I’m worried about liabilities with using NYU lol

cardislefttittie

@pinkfloydhoe BlackRidge University, Summit University 
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0ff2theraces

Ravenstones something idk
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evol214

@pinkfloydhoe I think you should just invent a new university for your book. I hope you're also feeling better author. Can't wait for the release of the new edited book and of course, updates on choices.
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pinkfloydhoe

Alright y’all I know I have been floating so many changes to betrayal. I’ve been in a weird ass place mentally and I’m pretty sure I’ve been in survival mode for two weeks. Like I’ve been severely mentally unwell. But I’m coming back to myself. That being said, most things about Betrayal will stay the same. The biggest change in my opinion will likely involve what happened with Ali’s mother. I may take back her dying and do like a hospital scene before she ultimately does die. 
          
          Love to you all. I’ve been working so hard on editing and writing and everything. Y’all are the heart of why I’m finally publishing. 

pinkfloydhoe

I’m thinking of setting betrayal in 2019, then having them meet again at the end of 2020. I’m in between breaking the book into two parts or just ending it right after they meet again. I like to hear opinions! 

latersgideon

I like the story the way it is originally written 
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evol214

@pinkfloydhoe I feel like this edit is going to be a completely different story than what is uploaded here on wattpad. I'm actually excited on how it will turn out. I do agree with the first two comments - the year 2020 just reminds me of covid too. Personally though, I really don't pay much attention to the year if the story is not historical.
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MaggieFilkins

@pinkfloydhoe girl your doing a whole rewrite...lol. I get it, but I like your book pretty much how it is but excited to see what you publish.
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