@pinky256 I started writing something similar to you but not poems, it caught my eyes and to be honest you write very beautifully just make sure you read it over and correct any spelling mistakes it makes it better trust me
Hello! I was wondering if you could perhaps check out my friend's first wattpad story: Never Ever( Charlotte's Story). It updates weekly, and is well worked for! It's not mine but I really want to support my fellow who's writing it! Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/38890406-never-ever-charlotte%27s-story
DUDE I LIKE THE LIPSTICK AND PLEASE YOU'LL ENJOY THE STORY