Hello! I just want to remind you, you are writing great... just keep on the good work. If you're worrying about not getting reads, or getting criticized by anyone losing interest on your writing, you can check out Abbie Emmons' YouTube channel, I gained my writing interest back from her.
One of the most important thing that I've learned is that, whether you aren't getting any honest criticism or not, You must keep on writing. Because it's your loved thing- the one that keeps you alive.
Sorry, for this message if I am annoying you, I just saw your message on Jj Jiang's message board, so came here to check ur work. But I can't read it because, it's not the language I know.
I am really sorry, if I have bothered you.
Have a nice day/night!