@pixybell
Hey guys, I recently just posted this fan fiction because I've read a lot myself, and I wanted to do my own version o it that didn't seem as generic. I know I'm not speaking to much of an audience, but to those who know the anime, please feel free to check out the book, and my other stories if you want. Thank you. https://www.wattpad.com/story/99217769
Hi, I'm Amatrix-Senpai, a newborn-coming Diabolik Lovers author. I've read some of you're comments, which are very reasonable ones in fact about each protagonist you've commented about! I agreed to many of them- the ones that I read about, of course. I-I was just wondering if you could read my new fanfiction for Diabolik Lovers. It's called: "Dead Faces". She might seem weak to you at first, but she grows stronger as the story progresses! I-I apologize if I took some of you're time! But please, comment back if you will! It'd mean a lot to me! Thank you!
Hi, we've talked before. You asked me to review your Diabolik Lovers story, which I very much enjoyed by the way, and I couldn't help but ask if you could return the favor. I've recently just posted the first chapter of my Diabolik Lovers fanfiction that I've worked hard on developing, and I was hoping to see if you could review it and give me a few of your ideas on the characters, if it's not too much to ask. Thank you
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I followed you! Hope u can follow me backAnyway I have a Diabolk Lovers Fan Fic! AyatoXyuiThank u so much!
Btw I just started on that book. I have many others,I just haven't put them on wattpad,it's way too much. But I'll eventually get there.
I think the book is great. The story has its priorities in order and I think it will make a great book, the only thing I would say is don't use the same word in one sentence because it will make the street sound repetitive, and take the time to describe the setting a bit more, like you did in the beginning of the book when you were pointing out the aroma of Dunkin donuts and the wind flowing by. Those little details can easily grab a reader's attention. Also in the future, make sure the timing isn't rushed, don't skip over so many scenes because then it causes the story to move too quickly which leaves no anticipation for the reader and people will be left with no imagination. But other than that I really liked your book and I hope you update it soon!
@4ever_julie hi I just want to ask if you could read my new book called 'Confidential lust? Or unconditional love?' For me. Could you give me some feed back and vote if you'd like? It'd mean so much. Thank you! Imani
Thank you for the follow love ^~^