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Hey hot stuff! I apologize for posting without your permission
I’m here to recommend a really good fanfic! Go read it and thank me later ᐢᗜᐢ
It’s really good ₊˚⊹♡
https://www.wattpad.com/story/372372014?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=itstaealways
Heyy i hope you will check my story and suggest me some tips
@heyooobunnyy i checked it out! first of all, very interesting idea! I would make the plot last longer, which means I would describe the setting more, perhaps more slowly, and look at the environment, like in books. They describe everything very precisely and bring their emotions into it. I would really put myself in the characters' shoes and describe how everything goes very precisely. You can also look at other books here or at my "already read" reading list - there are some very good books there. And what is also important is punctuation. Without punctuation, the story seems very dubious to new readers and can tempt them to stop reading the story. But overall very good!
