@pkarmanp
https://www.wattpad.com/story/363313411?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=lost_cupcake_47 First of all I'm sorry for posting it on ur board without permission but umm...... Well can y'all read my story too I've just started writing it..and give it some feedback on how it's ....
Book sin . It’s more psychological than physical. The story is about control, confusion, and the bond that can form when someone is isolated with the person holding them. He becomes attached to her, and she starts wrestling with emotions she never expected. It’s less about sex and more about how the mind can get trapped before the body ever does.
I’m actually writing Book 2 now. In Book 1 I focused more on the psychological side of captivity, attachment, and mind control than physical intimacy. I’d love your honest feedback on what you think needs fixing or adding. Do you think it needs actual physical scenes, more mystery, or should I keep leaning into the mental tension and emotional pull?
Hiii♡
Can you read my story?
Pleaseeeeee 乀(´Д`)ノ
Just give it a chance (〒∇〒)
https://www.wattpad.com/story/397763232?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Mik4lu