platiumdragontalon

EVERYBODY SAY GOODBYE AND GOOD RIDDANCE TO CHAMPIONS: TO BE SAVED (FORMERLY TO BE MORE).
          	ITS GETTING DELETED.
          	
          	Okay now that the farewells are over...
          	
          	EVERYBODY SAY A BIG HELLO TO CHAMPIONS: TO BE SAVED
          	It's a brand new version with a brand new attitude but I still gotta kill 'em all.
          	(I am not sorry for using a Pokemon them to advertise this)
          	So yeah, basically, I have so many dark thoughts and feeling towards the old book. Some of them are because of readers leaving. I became embittered. Felt my self worth drop to 0. Started bleeding (but Im goin' on 11 months without the crutch! Its hard but of you're in the situation too, I believe in you and I know you can make it through. I did it and I relied on it for over two years, with "lesser" versions dating back even further!). But I'd be wrong to say that was all of it. Free and Strong are not good books. Not in the finished sense. Theyre drafts, and I think they stand up in that sense. They provide a great basis for me to add to and change. But Saved never held up. It had its good points, sure, and for the longest time I used them as the excuse to leave the whole thing. But so many more points were bad. Like really bad. I'd lose track of characters and really important details (where's Iridian? What's Saki doing? What is the Ahemait Champion's weapon? What was her name? Why did Tsurara do /anything/?). So here I am starting fresh. Some chapters may be copy pasted (cause come on I nailed that prologue and you can fight me if you disagree), but for the most part, new and improved story. Let's start off exploring the dynamics of Athena, such as her relationships with her parents, Mousha, and her niece, the sweet but strange Kami.

platiumdragontalon

EVERYBODY SAY GOODBYE AND GOOD RIDDANCE TO CHAMPIONS: TO BE SAVED (FORMERLY TO BE MORE).
          ITS GETTING DELETED.
          
          Okay now that the farewells are over...
          
          EVERYBODY SAY A BIG HELLO TO CHAMPIONS: TO BE SAVED
          It's a brand new version with a brand new attitude but I still gotta kill 'em all.
          (I am not sorry for using a Pokemon them to advertise this)
          So yeah, basically, I have so many dark thoughts and feeling towards the old book. Some of them are because of readers leaving. I became embittered. Felt my self worth drop to 0. Started bleeding (but Im goin' on 11 months without the crutch! Its hard but of you're in the situation too, I believe in you and I know you can make it through. I did it and I relied on it for over two years, with "lesser" versions dating back even further!). But I'd be wrong to say that was all of it. Free and Strong are not good books. Not in the finished sense. Theyre drafts, and I think they stand up in that sense. They provide a great basis for me to add to and change. But Saved never held up. It had its good points, sure, and for the longest time I used them as the excuse to leave the whole thing. But so many more points were bad. Like really bad. I'd lose track of characters and really important details (where's Iridian? What's Saki doing? What is the Ahemait Champion's weapon? What was her name? Why did Tsurara do /anything/?). So here I am starting fresh. Some chapters may be copy pasted (cause come on I nailed that prologue and you can fight me if you disagree), but for the most part, new and improved story. Let's start off exploring the dynamics of Athena, such as her relationships with her parents, Mousha, and her niece, the sweet but strange Kami.

platiumdragontalon

The process has begun! Every republished chapter of Champions: To Be Free includes edited grammar (gosh yes, it was getting on my nerves) and lengthy author notes in bold at the end which describe everything from the purpose of the chapter to the changes upon its major edit to simple fun facts. Check it out!
          Bonus: chapters will only get reposted after their major edit in my super secret journal, so it's a great way to keep track of my progress!

platiumdragontalon

*rises from the dead with the loudest groan you've ever heard in your life*
          Transferring writing is too time consuming! Grammar edits and author notes will be happening, and all my writing will be reposted little by little. Good day.

platiumdragontalon

The biggest mistake of my life (art with a concentration in digital media).
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TheWeirdGeekyOne

@platiumdragontalon Ill have to read the series to see what they are~
            I hope it's going well, though! What are you studying? (If you don't mind me asking)
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platiumdragontalon

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@TheWeirdGeekyOne She lives, *and* she's slowly but surely going to be adding random author notes throughout the Champions Trilogy and continuing the drafts of To Be Saved and Greatest Illusion. Fun shit. But it'll be slow 'cause college is draining.
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