plexiglass1029

Okay so this is the new, edited version of Jerome’s Little Toy. I will say that already love the way it’s going.
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mi1even

Hello again! Sorry if this is super annoying, but when will the next chapter come out? (Jerome’s Little Toy) It’s so good and I love reading it! Sorry if I’m annoying about this, it’s just such a good book!!!

mi1even

hello again! so no hate whatsoever to anything at all, but in your first version of “Jerome’s Little Toy”, the chapters sort of progressively got shorter. i am not trying to be rude by any means, but maybe in this new version, maybe add some more details to the second book. i’m a writer as well so i was just throwing out some tips! i hope this didn’t upset you at all!

plexiglass1029

Our main character is going to be a bit more spontaneous and cocky ;)
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mi1even

that’s good! i really do love it so far and i see improvements from the last book! :)
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plexiglass1029

Not at all! That’s one of the reasons why I’m redoing the book.
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mi1even

hi there! so i’m a big fan of your “Jerome’s Little Toy” book and i added the new version to my library. i was just wondering, will you still be editing the old version, or just the new one?

plexiglass1029

Just the new one. I’ll continue to edit the old chapters and add new ones to the new version.
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