C.E. Plunkey

Hey guys. I'll be going on around a 2 week hiatus, so all critiques I have will be put on hold till then. I'll be making a library filled with these obligations so I can get to them at a later time.

Thanks for adding A Game of Crowns to your reading list. I hope you enjoy it(:

Going to make some even further deep POV edits to my novel (mostly dialogue). Changing a lot of the proper nouns used to he/she in two person exchanges, or eliminating them entirely. 
          
          I just posted Tatiana's latest chapter, so hopefully this will be all fine and dandy up until the point the edits are done.

Alrighty. Newest chapter of Princess of the Sky completed. Looks like Darius has found himself in quite a predicament.

@TheBrightMoonlight 
          
          Haha, thanks so much. I plan on checking out your story quite soon. I hope to enjoy it!

So I just noticed this, but my story is at #288 in fantasy. Thanks to all my regular readers who have helped me go this far already. It's been a very short time, but Princess of the Sky is on a steady course!

Making a series of deep pov edits to my chapters. A lot of the pronouns will be replaced with either more 'show' or just replaced with 'she' or something else. (Although, for stylistic preference, some will remain should the POV dictate it. If a princess is acting 'princessy', she'll be referred to as a princess.)
          
          These changes are superficial, and will not affect the current readership. Just that the style might be changed some for later chapters.

So we finally got the first glimpse of that naval battle guys. It wasn't much in Ulion's latest chapter, but it's definitely the beginning.
          
          Additionally, to anyone reading my story, Ulion and Tatiana are now of mixed descent. In addition, Marius is also  now confirmed to be Huslani. These are not big spoilers, so do not worry. I'd like to think the world of my novel is pretty diverse, what with all the different powers and what not.
          
          However, I 'am' writing characters first, not labels. So no worries. :-]
          
          Good reading, guys!

Okay, I got something of a surprise for you guys. FOUR glossaries! (Which will be updated when Beatrice's next chapter is posted.) And speaking of her chapter, the longest chapter to date.
          
          And a plot twist!
          
          DU DUN DUNNNNNNn

So I'm very hyped for my books first naval battle coming in the next chapter.
          
          Wooweewoo!