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Red eclipse is really getting into me I really want this girl to make a village because eclipse Village sounds like a good fucking name and two I think a lot of rogue Shinobi are like her abandoned  abused mistreated and torn to pieces by their own homes Cloud Village has a reputation of kidnapping children Stone Village has a reputation of hurting them to hard extends and betraying their allies maybe even their own Shinobi and Leaf has everything under the sun like the mist I personally think I want her to have a redemption story of building something new for people because let's be honest people need something to fight for She has Itachi yes but I think she can make something more out of people instead of the Akatsuki and I hope she does because let's be honest The only way she can have her own home is to make it and I think she needs to make one build a nation for people who've been done dirty

(you doing a pretty good job making me have sympathy for this character)I just realized your vampire character killed only terrible people or hire above who have done things very much worse to individuals or been involved in her childhood that pretty much was messed up from the start and she has not shown no mercy to that everything points to most of her crimes being revenge and getting back at people who pretty much harmed her but when her daughter came back she instantly calm down and wanted to retire from Shinobi life permanently and I bet a lot of mist Shinobi find out the horrible truth of what their village and that clan did would really understand why she broke and left the village because it was the bloody mist days that she left on She hated her village with a burning passion and she was 13 it would make anyone understand hell Mei finally digged up why she has a daughter at this time knowing she was the same age as he Itachi and digging up clan files and what they did to her in the profits they used her as a product for their sick entertainment even some elders of the village might have did that to her and it slowly pointing out that Mei Might know about it

Okay now it's getting more and more interesting she's not the one to lay down and let herself be played with She would actually talk shit to the mist when they ask why She betrayed the mist village and she would say both the mist and the bloody mist are nothing but monsters to her and they have helped create her She just did a cleansing of killing her clan of not making another and if Ambu Black ops fucks up another cleansing might happen She might actually kill every Ambu Black ops member as retaliation because let me be honest she hates them She hates the dark side of the villages She hates children being used as tools She hated every inch of being a ninja of a village that made her this way and that child that kid and Itachi are the one things that's keeping her from not blowing this entire Shinobi world into losing their special forces... So Naruto understands that finally because he realized she was born in the same situation as Zabaza but completely different She had a child She cares about more than anything and that's what makes her so dangerous

Reading the next chapter I just realized they are really fucked up they tried to interrogate her in certain areas because I think you would talk about her own childhood and what she had to go through in the mist village in her own clan Even the old fashioned mind transferred jutsu might actually make people question why are they doing this Knowing this girl has gone through more shit than them and the thing is the best way to torture an interrogator is show them you've gone through more to worse than that and I bet Itachi's about to get notified by her daughter that she's been kidnapped The one thing I love about this character this vampire is she cares about her daughter and she knows she's been tricked and lied to and the betrayal is not to her as a mother but to her daughter in the village that she was born in and she thought she was helping her And instead the mist and the leaf are about to witness what it meant to be in the bloody mist village in a clan like that that mistreatment was the doctrine and innocent girl made into a weapon for the village and she didn't want to be that anymore because she lost her daughter and that was the only thing that she is going to fight for and Itachi is a second thing she found because they're both broken people and I bet if He can save her She can save him situation

You did a very good job on this new story I just got a compliment you I hope she gets a happy ending I cried enough and be honest she loves her child and I don't think she's going to blame the kid she's going to blame the villages using a 7-year-old girl and a woman that was pregnant at the age of 13 She realizes it if they plan to use a child as a weapon and that is the most disgusting practice and I bet she would say it in the most serious way she never done that She never used children as weapons even though she was made as one and I bet the leaf are going to be scared because she is the powerful being and they have to realize they tormented this girl to make her that way

I think I like this vampire story it feels like she is I will say it like Itachi there's no reason why she hates her village and clan she actually has a reason not to like either of them she lost something The difference is Itachi has something left she didn't someone doesn't wake up in the morning and say I'm going to murder my entire clan she had a murder them for a reason And that is why the Mist Village is cautious because well it could have been the predecessor of hers who did something or the clan was up to something and she didn't want anything to be a part of that everything points to her being the same as Itachi and the mist new Kage knows it she is not arrogant she knows her village and the system that make people like her it has maybe has to do something with her own friends she still holds from the village or a relative she cared about in the clan that passed away because of it right now you made a good fanfiction with this vampire idea and I hope she can save Itachi and herself because they're one in the same and both villages might realize it and that's what terrifies them because they're willing to do horrible things because of it