Hiii could someone read my story 'cursed by blood' (it's a mafia trope) even just the first couple chapters n give me advice i feel like I don't wanna continue writing it until i have a little bit of criticism or advice from a couple people.
Anything would help really xoxox
Sorry to bother but do you know about a story where a girl has a relationship with her ADOPTED uncle (they aren’t blood related). And he (uncle) calls her “caramia”? I think they are Italian?