MageStar
I just wanted to say thank you for your help! I'm going to edit the stuff as soon as I can!
Thank you! Like wow! Really!
pokemon_addict_123
Don't worry about it! It's more important that the story is good, which it's turning out to be! You can always go over and check grammar and such later. For someone who's second language is English, you write better than some people who natively speak it. I hope you continue to write the story, it's amazing.