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I'm on mobile and I'm being lazy. If I was on PC it wouldn't have grammar errors. Np. What's your opinion on the story? Good bad great horrible what?

Adam9812

I'm not trying to offend you, but you have a lot of grammar errors in your story. For example, instead of saying "names" it should say "name's" as it is a shorten of name is, and whenever you cut out letters or anything you place an apostrophe.