porcelainpoet

changed my username!!
          	...I don't know if it's a vibe still debating on using laureas just because I absolutely love that name yk

porcelainpoet

p.s I have a sudden urge to make a love story with Remus but also Tonks but not a throuple just separate stories yk
Balas

porcelainpoet

okay so I have a question. Do you prefer, for example; John: how are you? or "how are you?" he asked, because I'm starting to write the chapters for my books and I've decided to use the movie for one of them and the first example is how the script is written and I wanted you're advice and preference, so if you could let me know :)

porcelainpoet

( @HogwartzPrincess ) no it's alright, thanks for the advice, I also get confused sometimes with the back and forth conversation without the characters names
Balas

HogwartzPrincess

Sorry not trying to nitpick or be annoying 
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HogwartzPrincess

I wish I could I just end up struggling and I’m always sad cause the summary looked so good and so did the bits I read… I’m dyslexic tho so it might just be because of that. 
            If your are writing like the second one though, Sometimes it’s best to put a reminder of who’s speaking if it’s a quick back and forwards between characters as sometimes it’s confusing who’s said what instead of “who are you?” He asked either mae sure you know who’s POV it’s from or have it be “Who are you?” John asked
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