potha2468

Thank u nice character sketch but riya change riya your brother but add riya's had two elder brother one maan Khurana rishab Khurana and also can u write kabir will not be Sikandar i will Sikandar who was later and riya was a painting teacher and also arjun will have a bandage type in right hand were riya name tattoo has been slit and also riya was stabbed by Sikandar on their wedding anniversary night how roshni was killed in show and also how arjun has bandage in the serial same and can u tell me adding mukrjee 

Phionex_Dreamer

hey I have done the changes. Now Riya has 2 elder brothers and bhabis. I changed Kabir. And also I dropped some characters. Arjun's uncle, aunt and younger brother is gone now. check.
          
          Riddhimaan Khurana
          Nick name Maan. Riya's elder brother (elder twin). Age-30. CEO of Khurana Constructions. Loves his only sister like a princess. Married for 4years, wife Gitanjali. Before Arjun and Riya's marriage he gave Arjun a hard time, but after the marriage they became brothers. He saw Arjun's suffering after Riya's demise. Shares a brotherly bond with Arjun.
          
          Gitanjali Khurana
          Riya's bhabi, Maan's wife. Age-27. Famous interior designer, owner of a designing company 'Ashiyana'. Loves Riya as her younger sister. She shares a loving bond with family members.
          
          Rishav Khurana
          Nick name Rishi. Riya's elder brother (younger twin). Age-30. CFO of Khurana Constructions. Loves his only sister like a princess. Married for 3years, wife Komal. Before Arjun and Riya's marriage he gave Arjun a hard time, but after the marriage they became brothers. He saw Arjun's suffering after Riya's demise. Shares a brotherly bond with Arjun.
          
          Komal Khurana
          Riya's bhabs, Rishi's wife. Age-26. Famous Writer, pen name 'Anamika'. Loves Riya as her younger sister. She shares a loving bond with family members. She follows one rule: Touch my family, face the consequences.
          
          Kabir Mittal
          Age-27. Riya's childhood friend. Owner of a famous Media House. He owns a high rated news channel 'Daily News' and a famous newspaper '365 Days'. Shares a brotherly bond with Arjun.

Phionex_Dreamer

@Phionex_Dreamer I'll take some time... after writing till a certain quantity, I will start updating... at least 15-20 days. 
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potha2468

@Phionex_Dreamer when will you update the story 
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potha2468

Thank u nice character sketch but riya change riya your brother but add riya's had two elder brother one maan Khurana rishab Khurana and also can u write kabir will not be Sikandar i will Sikandar who was later and riya was a painting teacher and also arjun will have a bandage type in right hand were riya name tattoo has been slit and also riya was stabbed by Sikandar on their wedding anniversary night how roshni was killed in show and also how arjun has bandage in the serial same and can u tell me adding mukrjee 

potha2468

Author can u post here

Phionex_Dreamer

@potha2468 
            
            Khurana's:
            
            Mr. Rudradev Khurana
            Very well-known businessman. Age-58. Owner of Khurana Constructions. A Indore base Real-estate company. Riya's father.  Arjun's father-in-law. A Very supportive father and father-in-law, loves Arjun like his own son.
            
            Mrs.Asha Khurana
            A well known socialite. Age-52. Riya's mother. Arjun's mother-in-law. Very supportive and loving. She loves Arjun's like her son.
            
            Rishav Khurana
            Handling Khurana's Mumbai branch. Age-23. Riya's younger brother. Loves his Sister and brother in law. For him Arjun is like his elder brother, his guide.
            
            
            Rawte's:
            
            Mr. Suryakant Rawte
            Arjun's father. Age- 58. A well known industrialist . Chairman of Rawte industries, a Pune based multinational company. A very strict father. He didn't support Arjun's dream of becoming an IPS officer, so when Arjun came back after becoming an officer he banished him from home. After Arjun left home he somehow regrets his disition. He has no idea about Arjun's marriage and the tragedy.
            
            Mrs. Kadambari Rawte
            Arjun's mother. Age-51. A loving mother, but can't take any stands over her husband's disition. She misses her Son, Arjun.
            
            Mr. Shashikant Rawte
            Arjun's uncle. Age-54. Works under his brother. A board member of Rawte industry. A little complicated character, loves his family but little power greedy person. He wants his son to take over the company.
            
            Mrs. Purnima Rawte
            Arjun's 'chhoti maa'. A very loving, caring woman. Age-45. Loves Arjun as her own son but doesn't have the courage to go against her husband.
            
            Himanshu Rawte
            Arjun's younger cousin, Shashikant's son. Age-23. Working in Rawte Industry with his 'bade-papa',Suryakant Rawte. Loves his Elder brother Arjun. Arjun and Himanshu are like 'Ram-Bharat' jodi of Rawte family.
            
            Other characters:
            
            Mr. Adidev Mukherjee. A Retired Army man, now a NGO owner in Darjeeling.
            
            Kabir Sehgal. Riya's childhood best friend. He has a secret. He is the CEO of Sehgal Group.
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@potha2468 
            ETF:
            
            ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod
            ETF chief.  Age 30. He belongs to royal family, the crown prince of Jaipur; has a fiancee, Ayesha. Was once Arjun's best friend. Due to work pressure, they lost contact. He doesn't have any idea about Arjun's marriage and tragedy. He will get to know soon but not in detail.
            
            Sr. Ins. Ayesha Kapoor
            Arms and ammunition specialist. Previously worked as undercover officer. ETF member. Age 27. Sameer 's fiancee. Very efficient at work and friendly with her co-workers.
            
            Sr. Ins. Shreekant Sen
            Technical guy with curly hair. Also known as Shree. Age-25. ETF 's Technical Expert. Efficient in his work and friendly with other ETF members except one who calls him 'Specky Sen'. In a secret relationship with Liza, but in office, they are sworn enemies.
            
            Ins. Chandrakant Patil
            Ex-Commando. Also known as Chhotu; but unlike his name, he is huge. A strong big muscle man with a soft heart.  Age-26. One of the ETF members, Shree's  best buddy. He has a huge informer network.
            
            Dr. Liza D'Cruze
            Forensic expert. Age-25. A confident work efficient girl. An important part of ETF. Very friendly with other members except her 'Specky Sen'. Though She and her Specky aka Shree is in a secret relationship, but in office they share a Tom and Jerry bond.
            
            Ms. Sakshi Anand
            Ex-crime reporter. A bubbly girl. Age-25. Very friendly, extrovert and talkative. She is in ETF on ministry's order. Her work is to make sure ETF's hard work reaches to public through her reports, and she is pretty efficient at her work.
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@potha2468 
            Main lead:
            ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte
            A no-nonsense, hot-headed, rebel cop. Age - 29. Right now, posted at Nagpur crime branch. Soon, will join ETF as 2nd in command.
            He loves his wife, but lost her 1year 3months ago in a tragedy.
            He has no connection with his family as his father doesn't support his profession.
            He has very supportive in-laws,  but after losing his wife, he lost contact with everyone.
            ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod, once his best friend. Due to time and distances, they lost connection.
            
            Riya Khurana/ Riya Arjun Rawte
            A beautiful woman. A very talented artist (painter). Age 26. She is the love of Arjun's life. Due to a tragedy, she is declared dead (for now).
            In her family, she had her father, her mother, her younger brother. Other than this, she had a childhood best friend. And her husband Arjun, the love of her life.
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Phionex_Dreamer

Hi, I was wondering how to share the character sketch with you before publishing.  But seems like there is no such way. Do you have any idea or a way... let me know. 

Phionex_Dreamer

@Phionex_Dreamer because once published it will be available for everyone...  and I don't want to place a rough work infront of everyone... 
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potha2468

@Phionex_Dreamer can u write here in message box
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