w_heisenberg_w
I really liked your mature story, looking forward for the upcoming parts.
w_heisenberg_w
Overall I applaud you for writing the story as a whole it had an amazing hook at first and I was refreshing the your account every once in a while to check if you published any new updates
w_heisenberg_w
I meant that as a final chapter it didn't have that "oomph" it felt pretty tame. This is just my opinion I am happy to hear your approach
pragyyaaaa
do you mean lacking about the detailing while they had sex in the end? i did that on purpose