Hey girls!
I'm Adrian and I read your story about 9C and I must say it was totally relatable! I just passed out of school and your descriptions brought tears to my eyes... they were really touching.
I think that you'll have a good plot in hand, you just need to have longer chapters and make your chapters grammatically correct that's all. Otherwise, Kudos for having written such an emotional book!
I'll be honest, I checked out yours with the hope that you would check out mine in return
My story is called "Because I'm A Nerd" and I would love all sorts of feedback on the same!
Do give it a chance!
*inserts hope*
Adrian xx