preksha3030

Heyy author 
          	Just came across your book
          	I read the character introduction and it had a lot of grammatical mistakes and it didn't catch my eye
          	But when I read the first 2 chapters as well as the prologue they were good and thoughtfully written.
          	But after that the same grammatical mistakes followed and I think the pov of every character sounded same from chapter 3 . I am really interested in the story of all the four couples but pls put a very good thought while writing chapters as it is very hard to differentiate between the characters. 
          	I am dropping the book for now as for me a story should actually make you feel the same emotions as the characters are feeling and your story actually did in the starting but it is losing interest from chapter 3.
          	In future if you edit this book and make the writing of every character a little more deep I would definitely  read it and comment as much as I can.
          	
          	Sorry if I sounded rude but this is just my opinion. 
          	You have a potential which I saw in the starting 2 chapters and if you really put a really good thought and improve your vocabulary you can actually create magic with your stories.

preksha3030

Heyy author 
          Just came across your book
          I read the character introduction and it had a lot of grammatical mistakes and it didn't catch my eye
          But when I read the first 2 chapters as well as the prologue they were good and thoughtfully written.
          But after that the same grammatical mistakes followed and I think the pov of every character sounded same from chapter 3 . I am really interested in the story of all the four couples but pls put a very good thought while writing chapters as it is very hard to differentiate between the characters. 
          I am dropping the book for now as for me a story should actually make you feel the same emotions as the characters are feeling and your story actually did in the starting but it is losing interest from chapter 3.
          In future if you edit this book and make the writing of every character a little more deep I would definitely  read it and comment as much as I can.
          
          Sorry if I sounded rude but this is just my opinion. 
          You have a potential which I saw in the starting 2 chapters and if you really put a really good thought and improve your vocabulary you can actually create magic with your stories.

Sonuwrtz

Hello dear♡
          
          I hope you're doing well. I'm sincerely sorry for posting my book Crimson bonds in  your profile without your permission. 
          
          My book is about a multi couple story ,it has thrilling suspense and romance in it .
          
          To know more about it please do check it . 
          
          I would love it if you give a try to my book and give honest feedback on it .
          
          If you like the book then please show it by voting and commenting on it .
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/377691231?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=whosonu 
          
          Hoping for a positive response!
          
          Thank you♡
          ~sonu