B_BLACK-BIRD
☆ Hello!
Good evening! Sorry to invade your wall, but I couldn't help but do it because I need to praise your story, which, in just three chapters, completely enchanted me, leaving me itching for more. And, I apologize for complimenting you here and not throughout the chapters, but the problem is that this is not my native language, so I can't do it *melting emoji*
Anyway!
AMAZING! Your writing is magnificent on the same scale as Emily Prentiss with gray hair, I loved the way you brought the character into the story and how you made them get to know each other, the environment and everything else, and I loved the relationships the protagonist has, it's new and different, but a good different. So: congratulations!
B_BLACK-BIRD
Oh, I'm Brazilian. I speak Portuguese, which is a shame in part because I had hopes for a moment, but, no matter what, Google Translate is my greatest ally (since my English teachers unfortunately weren't there). Anyway, I'm glad you have a Beta-Reader to help you, even though I didn't see any spelling mistakes, and that you write every day. I swear, when I saw that a new chapter had been posted and with the name "Elizabeth" my heart raced and I ran to it (which makes me sad because I would really like to comment as the chapters go by; but I'll try to see what I can do, I don't give up that easily). And, finally again, I'm sure that new readers will soon appear and leave lots of comments because this is a wonderful story and your writing is even more magnificent. Honestly, the main character is so different from all the others I've read, which really enchants me and fascinates me with this story!
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prentissmultiverse
@B_BLACK-BIRD hey there! My native language is german, so I sometimes struggle as well to find the right words or even make simple grammar mistakes :D But I am glad to have a superb Beta-Reader (and friend) who helps me a lot! and thank you so much for your kind words! I try to keep the courage up and upload the stuff I write. Maybe one day I get a few more readers hooked for my stories, but for now I am happy how it is. My story may not be that famous, but I still enjoy writing it every day :3
B_BLACK-BIRD
Oh, no need, thanks. I say this from my heart, I really do. I'm captivated by each chapter, even more so by the last one which certainly put me in the protagonist's shoes; I feel like her about being left waiting too long. But, it's Emily Prentiss, I would hope so too. Anyway, thank you for your words ♡
And, if English is not your native language, could you tell me what it is? Maybe not speaking the same language and expressing my opinion at the end of the chapters hasn't become easier (I really feel, most of the time, about not being able to comment because the work is not part of my language and I depend on the translator to use and interpret it, especially when the work is as good as yours and has few comments But please, don't let yourself be discouraged or shaken by this, I truly understand, but writing is a form of liberation and you do it. this so beautifully ;))
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