prettyinpunk

omg oops! thanks sooo much XD and its a typo :P 
          
          

@StormAtNight: well the four sisters are amelia melissa serina and sammy right? like 30-40 paragraphs down, when melissa enters, it says that Melissa was held up in the air by "Storm" and i have zero idea who that is or if it was just a typo?

hiii there
          im new to wattpad and i just posted my new story called POPULAR GIRL & THE GANG LEADER=LOVE?
          
          the title pretty much describes what the story's about
          
          so if you could check it out i'd appreciate it a lot!
          thankss :)

pardon? i didnt get the part when you said it keeps mentioning the name storm :S lol  but thanks for reading our story :P
          
          Storm xx

heya! If you don’t mind, could you take a look at "the four sisters" on my profile page? My sister (her account is Angii121) and I are writing it and I would love to get some honest feedback! It would be really awesome if you could, but no pressure! 
          
          Thanks a bunch, 
          
          Storm xx
          

@wendyandpeterpan: haha its no problem i <3 new stories :)

yes! i agree ;; when i text i usually tend to add ALOTTTT OFFF UNNECESSARRRYYY LETTTTERSSS & than when i am writing something ;; it just makes my entire thing go BOOOM! (: btw, thanks for your lovely comment :) & it's  not easy to fill a water gun with lizard pee, trust me but it's not impossible! :D < #333 thanks, again! (:
          thanks for everythingggg!

@LealBelle16: yeah ill look at em later :) idk how much help ill be but i love a new story

@wendyandpeterpan: haha mine does too i have to focus super hard when i write to make sure. i think its texting that messes everyone up they start to normally spell that way haha

hey totally agree with wendy and peterpan about how annoying these get, but ur really good at giving feedback (so iv heard) so, sorry but i was just wondering if u could possibly maybe just take a peak at some of my writings? theres the karabaiys and if u want, the woods, but u just would like to know what u think, what i need to improve.  Im gonna warn u, my grammar sucks :)