Hii! ☺️ I js wanna say, I love ur writing sm! I love the way you’ve incorporated jasmine and gave her a major role in the plot line without fully changing important events or taking away from other characters:)) I also love how you put her and Eli together before he turned into hawk! Like how he was comfortable enough with her to make a move without needing the confidence from hawk to do it for him, if that makes sense☺️ overall, I love how you write ! it’s so hard to find well written books for cobra Kai, this one is definitely my favorite