I’m going through a lot right now and I feel Like my motivation for writing disappearing... and writing the only peace I got but now look it’s getting ruin. I just hurt mannnnn
I really like your ideas and writing style but some constrctive critism from a fellow writer who still needs alot of criticism. When you start you descriptions sentencing with there names or without continuing on the last sentences idea it makes it a bit impersonal. Its good its just a square that needs to be rounded just a bit.