princessallie1

im sorry i could figure out how  to finish tough love but im writing a new book called the heart isnt it

boyxboylifeboyonboy

I really like your ideas and writing style but some constrctive critism from a fellow writer who still needs alot of criticism. When you start you descriptions sentencing with there names or without continuing on the last sentences idea it makes it a bit impersonal. Its good its just a square that needs to be rounded just a bit.

princessallie1

Yeah I’m tryna work on it 
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