@princessallie1
Immortal Love is out if you don't mind I love to hear your inputs I'm trying something new and here it is!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1554340795?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=princessallie1
So I'm finally in a mindset where I can write, and I want you guys to know I'm deleting the vampire book and remaking it
I really like your ideas and writing style but some constrctive critism from a fellow writer who still needs alot of criticism. When you start you descriptions sentencing with there names or without continuing on the last sentences idea it makes it a bit impersonal. Its good its just a square that needs to be rounded just a bit.
im hereree