Allie😘

So I'm finally in a mindset where I can write, and I want you guys to know I'm deleting the vampire book and remaking it

I really like your ideas and writing style but some constrctive critism from a fellow writer who still needs alot of criticism. When you start you descriptions sentencing with there names or without continuing on the last sentences idea it makes it a bit impersonal. Its good its just a square that needs to be rounded just a bit.

im hereree