Well your story has an interesting plot, I must say. I personally am not one for ghosts but this has lots of potential. Do you mind if I give you some critical advice to make you a better writer? Your story is great, however maybe you could look up how to spell some of the words. Also, "ya" isn't a proper way to say "yeah". I hate to sound like a grandma but I am only trying to help. But remember, with a little bit of fixing grammatical errors and proof reading, your story is a huge success that has the power to be a hit!
