@Ellie569349 hi, I am currently outlining it.
What you read was my first draft. Before I edited it and did a rewrite, I wanted to test it out to see if it would have an audience and build a fan base before doing a rewrite and then queuing, as I plan on going traditional before I self-publish it.
I will say the book you read is a little different from the current book one, as I am in the middle of rewriting now.
However really glad you like book 2! I recommend coming over to the substack as I announce updates. Also you can read the new chapter 4 there to see one of the chapter rewrites (free to read!)
It is way more professional. The brothers have much more depth. Fixed the tense issues. What you read was my throw up draft, but I am beyond glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much!