styles_orama

Thanks for reading and voting for STRONG ENOUGH! That was pretty damn fast. Guess I better start writing!!! xx

princessofaokigahara

It was bloody good that's why I kept reading and reading it. It's just so different than the others. I loved it!!! Please keep writing. You are so talented xxx
Balas

LoveVincitOmnia

Thank you for reading and voting on LifeStyles.

LoveVincitOmnia

And also Hummingbird - thank you 
Balas

justapriincess

Hey @princessofaokigahara !
          
          It would be super cool if you can go read my book "Khloé" and tell me your opinion about it,
          
          Thank you!

princessofaokigahara

I just read your story. It isn't so bad but I think you can do better than this. You can give more details about what happened or what she thinks and you can put more emotions in the story. And -for me- you shouldn't write the conversations like dialog. It seems a little bit unprofessional. That's it so far. And also I agree with the girl who wrote some good points on the comment part. Your welcome :)  
Balas