Dear author,
I have read your book about the Naga brothers and the Lamia Reader and I have to say that while most of the plot was good, the overall length, lack of expressive story telling, and blending if events didn't make it such a good read. The final part also was like a cliffhanger more than an end parting.
I do not know if you will be rewriting this, but once you are up to it, I hope you do. The book would be such a wonderful masterpiece if you redid it.
I hope this came out as constructive criticism.
Sincerely, a fellow wattpad user.
