princesstemidayo

Hello, everyone!
          	Please, read and comment. Let me know what you think
          	I just published "CHAPTER ONE " of my story "Rejected Hearts Meet ". https://www.wattpad.com/1512835316?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=princesstemidayo

ShaniceDurand

How please do help

ShaniceDurand

@ShaniceDurand ok got it so more grammar check got it. I just did want it to erase the gay  slang out of the story do u think that's a bad idea 
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princesstemidayo

@ShaniceDurand Okay
            First, try using punctuations. It's hard to read through.
            But other than that, the story is really good.
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