kxnglarreh
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hi love! sorry for bothering you but I was wondering if you could read my book “mirage?” it’s not a lot but I would appreciate feedback?? thank you so much!
princevivienne
@kxnglarreh Hi! Don't worry, it's no problem. I have a bit of feedback, but it's almost all positive. Mirage is very emotional already, and that's always good in a story. You put lots of intricate details in your book, which is also great. Chapters are a bit short, but that's not important so long as the content is read-worthy. If I was into H.S fanfic, I would keep reading. Do you think you could read my book and give me some feedback as well? I'd like to see if it's something others would seek out... Thanks, Evelyn
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