__EasternAssassin__
Hi!
Honest review ahead!!!!
What ever you are doing with the story and plot is quite amazing I guess your imagination is really very good, but only that the way you are presenting it is lowkey plain and emotionless.
Still I believe that can be fixed very easily.
I wouldn't call myself a writer but then I am a Dark romance enthusiast and I read too many books to leave a fresh mind like yours unadvised.
If at all you are serious about writing why don't we have a talk elsewhere?
You can DM me on Instagram- @whynottezz
-with love
PS: I am in love with the plot by the way. You can trust me babe!
priviloveyouall
@__EasternAssassin__ Hi dear, thank you so much for your honest feedback and for appreciating my story and plot. It really means a lot to me that you took the time to read and share your thoughts. I truly respect your suggestion to collaborate, but I would like to continue writing this story on my own. This is my first time writing after many years of being a reader, and I want to express my ideas and emotions in my own way and grow through the process. Your review about the emotions being low really helped me understand where I can improve, and I will definitely work on making the story more expressive and engaging. Thank you again for your support and honesty. I really appreciate your kindness. I hope you’ll continue reading and sharing your reviews with me. Much love!