Nanofied
First of all, I'd like to thank you for not only using up your time in reading the story but also giving genuine compassion for what I'm trying to make. You're actually the first one who ever gave this book a chance and I really appreciate it so much. I've been planning to read your second story as well because the chapters I have are way too much. For the first chapter, I'll try to find a better way to introduce that part since I did brought up new names to the reader. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. For the second chapter, I've designed it to be a little bit of a breather because I worry that I might put a little too much for the reader. It also makes up the foundation for the dynamic Lux and Guzan have. About Guzan's hair, I meant it as a friendly rub but I still couldn't find any word to fit it. And firecracks is the crap version in their world. I'll definitely check in on the conversation they had with Louis. Again, thank you so much!
priyanka_k
@Nanofied You're welcome :) The idea is really unique. You only gotta work on the structure, the flow and the amount of information you put in one chapter. Good luck!
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