project-warriors

thanks for 60 followers!

Ferretstripe

Hi there -north_storm-! I was wondering if you wanted to check out my new warriors fanfic, End! Thanks if you do! :)

project-warriors

i read it! i like the story, for five chapters. though a few times you wrote two punctuation marks, and there should be one per sentence. you could change it to,
            "What?" Dockstar turned his head sharply, glaring at Crowdapple.
            but yeah, otherwise it's good!
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