stop this acc is OLD

@presleym2009 okay so i think your plot line it pretty good just you use the same words over again and its doesnt describe everything so i recommend usong thesaurus.com and your layout is bit more of bc the author note so i recommend deleting those and stop using a bunch of dashes to separate your work x

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