Wow...u actually Inspried me to do something similar yet different from your idea...can I do it...I will defiantly mention/credit you????....if you allow I wanna try what you did...just little different...May I???
How dare you write such a beautiful story and still say it's messy ? Why did you have to write a story that makes me cry ? Why break my heart like this ? Your story was amazing and don't apologize for how it was written cause in two word it's "exceptional" and "beautiful" . Loved your work . Thank you for the story though . I love tragedies even though they break my heart every time