hi, i'd really appreciate it if you didn't comment on my story and bash my work, it's really discouraging and no, i didn't know that i line from a chapter in my story was in after, i've only read the first chapter of that book, and i got that line from a movie i saw, and yes, i know i used the word orbs, and i know it's overused, but there's no law that says i can't use it, and i try to use alternatives to the word, so please keep your comments to yourself, thank you.