rex1697

Hi! I've just finished writing my first story, it's a ChanSung (skz) oneshot, would you mind proof reading it? There's a little smut in the end, so if you don't like it, I get it.. the title is "just another ChanSung" ..since I like your work I hope you can propose any changes to it if you don't like it or suggest my work to your readers if you like it <3 thanks in advance for any reply to this message 

psycho_smooch

Hi! Really sorry for the very late reply; I’ve only just remembered the “Conversations” tab on Wattpad hahaha. 
            
            If you still want some feedback for your ChanSung one shot, I recommend start by trying to separate your fic into small paragraphs so people can easily read it e.g. making a new paragraph every time the main focus of what’s happening/who’s going where/who’s speaking changes. 
            
            I think your English is really good for someone who isn’t a native speaker and I encourage you to continue practicing writing if you want to improve. 
            
            Hope this helps!
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