ptxehlia
For those who are reading my story, Thank you~ Also, Sorry because I'm not updating it.. It's because I'm writing it on a notebook then type it here so... I'm Sorry... Anyways! I hope you like it the new chapter ≧﹏≦
Pixel1014
@ptxehl@ptxehlia can I make a suggestion please for your books? I read the Naruhina And Kakasaku fanfic. So I was thinking maybe u could add more details in each sentences because I am the type of person who is looking for juicy words, for example when hinata said 'N'no I can't remember.....Ouch my head hurts' Now there is no problem with that sentence it is properly written with the words that we are able to understand but it would be better if you add more stronger words and more details like Hinata:N-no I don't recall. Hinata suddenly tensed up and put her hand on her head wincing Naruto: You okay? Hinata: M-my head hurts but I-m sure its no-ow!' Just a suggestion but yeah something like that but your tory plot is very interesting and cool!
