puppieluver0
@TyeDyeBites not really, I just don't like it when people are mean to each other online. It's bad enough in real life. But I'm glad you liked it.
puppieluver0
@TyeDyeBites not really, I just don't like it when people are mean to each other online. It's bad enough in real life. But I'm glad you liked it.
puppieluver0
@TyeDyeBites I don't pretend to understand transgender issues, but I didn't want you to feel alone since you were so upset.
puppieluver0
@TyeDyeBites I don't pretend to understand transgender issues, but I didn't want you to feel alone since you were so upset.
puppieluver0
@TyeDyeBites I don't pretend to understand transgender issues, but I didn't want you to feel alone since you were so upset.
puppieluver0
@TyeDyeBites I don't pretend to understand transgender issues, but I didn't want you to feel alone since you were so upset.
lilthflames
Hi I noticed that you were (awesomely) correcting errors in a story that I was reading. Correct spelling and grammar just make stories so much more enjoyable to read (so thank you for that)! Are you an editor (for fun, I imagine) or just driven insane by grammatical errors? I'd love if someone would tell me if I've made any mistakes (spelling, grammatical, etc..) in my work, To Kiss a God. So I guess this is my roundabout way of asking if you would be willing to check out my work and if you catch any glaring errors let me know?? (No pressure or anything)
lilthflames
Okay! Thank you so so SO much for all the feedback and all of your corrections :D I'll work on spacing it out better!! Thank YOU!!!!
puppieluver0
@lilthflames ok, I've read a bit so far and the major problem I've seen is you need to space out your chapters. Basically, sometimes there's an entire chapter that's entirely one paragraph. There needs to be more splits/spaces in each chapter. It doesn't really matter where, just break up the paragraphs.
thatoneblwriter
Thank you for all of the votes! I hope you like it so far~ <3
MelaninBisou
Hey can you check out my story for me?