purplemist_

Safe haven is now a published book

annie_sinclair25

@purplemist_ congrats ma!
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RUBYCOVEY

hi po! sorry po for promoting here huhu and thank you so much for giving small writers a chance to share their stories too ♡ please continue supporting this author po <3
          
          if you like college romance, slow burn tension, rich boy x struggling girl, family problems, complicated love, and stories that feel soft but painful at the same time, maybe you’ll like my story What Goes Around ♡
          
          it’s about Zyren Chua, a student trying her best to survive college and life, until she meets Trevor Valderrama, someone completely out of her world. what starts with misunderstandings slowly turns into something deeper, messier, and harder to escape.
          
          because sometimes, no matter how much you try to move on, the past always finds its way back to you.
          
          thank you so much for reading this po and sorry again for the disturbance (´•̥̥̥ω•̥̥̥`) ♡
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/316031248?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=RUBYCOVEY

presidenthatdog

i was planning to buy the story (jar of love) because someone on tiktok recommended it and the comments looks promising. so, i checked out some of the free chapters first. anw, can someone vouch if it’s worth it?
          
          i got a bit hesitant after reading the free parts because the narration sometimes feels like several thoughts stitched together, and the sentence flow can feel uneven. i hope the author won’t take this negatively, but I think the writing could still improve in terms of smoother transitions so readers can follow the emotions more naturally. at times, it feels like ideas are being poured out without a clear focus on the main point. some paragraphs also come across as a bit redundant, though emotionally sincere, it's kind of repetitive. anw, these are just some of my thoughts for the few free chapters and maybe there's improvements if i proceed with the story.

purplemist_

@presidenthatdog Hello, thank you for the honest feedback po. First story ko 'tong jar of love kaya may mga butas pa talaga when it comes to writing. Salamat gagamitin ko yung mga sinabi mo to improve more.
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PrincessDianneSerra4

Hi po,,,,,,super gaganda talaga po ng stories nyo talaga, wag po sana kayong mapagod na mag write kase nakaka inspire po talaga

purplemist_

@PrincessDianneSerra4 hello po, thank u so much for the kind words. so much appreciated
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