purpleraeee

.hi i know wala na po akong time magbasa ng mga stories niyo here but I'll try pa rin to support yours at sa mga nag unfollow sana okay lang kayo, salamat! 

aebanana

‎Hi! I just recently published my new story. Would you like to follow each other? If you want, we can also give feedback and vote on each other’s works. Thank you so much! 
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          ‎Here's the link of my story:
          ‎https://www.wattpad.com/story/158518235?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=aebanana

purpleraeee

@aebanana ok naman, sana walang mag unfollow. 
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arreeem

hellooo author! Done reading yours. Your story was a mindblow tho some chapters may napansin lang ako. Kulang pa sa description, kailangan pa ng detalye lalo na sa emosyon ng bawat karakter mo. Understanable din yong mga minor typo's. So, ayon nga for me kailangan pa ng expand ng konti sa pagnarrate since Third person POV ang gamit mo. Pero ayos lang yan kasi natututunan naman yan. Nakakaexcite yong chp 20 lalo na kung anong mangyayari sa susunod na updates. Hope Andres will save Vetina!
          
          So, i'll give 7/10. Keep inking miss rae♡

purpleraeee

@arreeem thanks for the time and effort to read, Author at sa feedback. ^^,
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