Jordan freeman

You deserved a follow your Percy Jackson trilogy was great *thumbs up*

Anytime

@bookbreath no probs great story 

@LeafOfMint  of course your coming a long way or ready I'm almost ready for the book

@purpleroyalty1 Thank you for your feedback! I 'll be sure to try my hardest when it comes to my writing and making you enjoy my characters and story 

Also your writing is good punctuation Grammer giving life to your chracters making your story diverse bringing in all aspects if people I myself can relate to many characters I played lots of sports but I'm also extremely smart and as I said the top reader at my school and I also wanna go to a good college and get scholarships and I also have younger siblings hat I would risk my life for so that's very well done the length is medium it's not super long but it's long and you keep the length of the parts consistent which is also good so basically overall you have a really good story and that's coming from me as I read about 30-60 stories a day more if I'm free so I Will take my time and read your story if I see anything I will let you know

@_MarShiro_ don't give me any hints! I will end up figuring it out with the hour lol

@_MarShiro_ yayyyyyy

Mm well I can't tell you that'll spoil it but I have a plan

I read almost all your stories they were all outstanding

I like to well after I finish before I publish my parts I read it myself like as a reader to check for any mistakes and such as I don't miss much lol

@lebloodyknife welcome and don't sorry about it I can write over 6000 words and I still occasionally get stuck with spelling and such as so your doing pretty well