pyaarkahanise

whispers of the heart reached 1K views 
          	
          	Thank you everyone

19325abn

@Vinnie_Vuriti  yes she did cuz  she asked what didnt we as readers not like in the chap n i said that the whole story was a mess etc etc...n it was long back....> <
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MoonFlowerrr__

@19325abn did she really blocked you? Oh gohd that lady is crazy...
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19325abn

@pyaarkahanise I can't reply to you under celebrity castaway cuz the writer has blocked me..I don't get it if the writer is not sportive enough to accept the negative reviews as well then y ask the readers about their opinion even. Also tbh honest her stories are all the same ..I mean in all her stories manik is the Heartbreaker n nandini keeps weeping about it ,in between we have the unwanted characters like soha or rose or alya marrying manik and nandini paring up with someone else...basically it just doesn't give MaNan vibes
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author_shravani

Hey girl !
          
          OK so I did read your story and here's the feedback.
          Honestly, the storyline is very lovely, unique and relatable for most people. But it lacks the sparks, the spice, some tension and that's why it feels kinda gloomy. Also it was very direct, details and descriptive writing could make it more better. Otherwise the writing style was good. 
          
          I can guide you if you need help, just let me know. 
          Just answer these questions :
          1. Do you only want it to be a short story? Or can u opt for a longer one?
          2. On average how much words does each chapter consist?
          3. Do you really want to end up Nandini with Manik?? Or could she end with Raghav?

author_shravani

@pyaarkahanise I'm not on any intention of writing that for now. I suggested the plot for you, if you want to write. 
            Also mention not, I'm glad if it helps you to improve :)
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pyaarkahanise

@written_by_tara_ now I want to read the first version full story. it sounds interesting  I'll definitely read it if you write on it. 
            
            PS : I'll keep in mind all your suggestions, thank youu
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author_shravani

Also I would suggest, work on your asthetics too. Use Pinterest for it has gorgeous pictures. I'm sure you'll find something nice. I'm not trying to be rude but your cover was giving "tiktok era vibes". You can see on youtube how to make book covers and stuff. 
            
            Also, I know my suggest above for your book may sound like its directly from an Indian soap, but tbh most Desi wattpad stories are basically Indian tv serials that our mother's watch, but just in a more romantic and glorified way.
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pyaarkahanise

whispers of the heart reached 1K views 
          
          Thank you everyone

19325abn

@Vinnie_Vuriti  yes she did cuz  she asked what didnt we as readers not like in the chap n i said that the whole story was a mess etc etc...n it was long back....> <
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MoonFlowerrr__

@19325abn did she really blocked you? Oh gohd that lady is crazy...
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19325abn

@pyaarkahanise I can't reply to you under celebrity castaway cuz the writer has blocked me..I don't get it if the writer is not sportive enough to accept the negative reviews as well then y ask the readers about their opinion even. Also tbh honest her stories are all the same ..I mean in all her stories manik is the Heartbreaker n nandini keeps weeping about it ,in between we have the unwanted characters like soha or rose or alya marrying manik and nandini paring up with someone else...basically it just doesn't give MaNan vibes
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SavitaSureshShetty

I have an idea on shivika. Will you cooperate

SavitaSureshShetty

Ok
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pyaarkahanise

@SavitaSureshShetty oh dear. I really liked the concept and your efforts. But the problem is I didn't watch Ishqbaaz. So I may not able to justify characters. Sorry.
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SavitaSureshShetty

Did you like the idea
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