Wattpad is being wonky again and won't let me respond to comments on my chapters. Anyway, I've been enjoying yours. I wanted to let you know that, thanks to your feedback, I changed the line you pointed out that didn't seem quite right. While your suggestion was good, you mixed present tense with past tense in the same sentence, which is what I was trying to avoid. But still, even if I phrased the line correctly, the fact that it didn't seem quite right is a problem. I make changes all the time based on readers' feedback. So if anything ever seems the least little bit weird, be sure to let me know so I can fix it. :)