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I need suggestions and ideas for my book, I'm just writing as I go and from my phone, if there are too many errors in my book just leave a comment near the error and I'll try to fix.. Thanks

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Hi I am a new writer and I want too know what you guys think about my story. Writing form an iPhone is hard and I am trying to make my story as punctual as I can. This is a story that I am making up as I go so if I happen to mistake details or change the storyline please just let me know I'll fix it