@AllCrazyHema No, no, thank you so much! You have very enthusiastic and entertaining comments and constructive criticism is always important.
In many chapters, the beginning says that whatever goes on in this chapter is a month or so after the previous chapter
(ie “It’s been a month since father last came home” and it talked about her father at home in the previous chapter)
So in actuality, she met them in like mid September and it is now like February. Yeah, 5 months is probs a very short period of time for many people with trust issues but
1. I don’t have much experience with that, atleast not at the level of Jasmine’s, so I can’t exactly relate to her and make the story accurate
2. I like to think that Jasmine saw something in the Boys that made her feel loved and safe and happy and that’s why she let them in. I want Jasmine to be a very complex character. She’s skeptical, but at the same time can completely trust people that she believes in. She’s a snarky, nerdy girl that has her demons and her dreams.
Thank you for the feedback! I hope this clears things up. If you have any more suggestions, please feel free to comment!