@queenfromthe70s
Not me crying quietly in my bed while writing the next chapter of Liar while my partner loudly snores in my ear. Sometimes I wonder if I have traumatized you guys too much.
@queenfromthe70s happily traumatized – can't wait!
@queenfromthe70s I'VE MISSED YOU SOO MUCH
Thank you for continuing the story
is that directed to me?
I thought when you said "it can't end right here" was to resurrection. lol, sorry.
@WISHFUL-THINKER10 howdy! Is what directed to you?
It can't end there, right?
Welcome back!!!
Welcome back mama
I’m scared.
I just posted the first chapter of a little short Freddie story <3
@queenfromthe70s whats the name, I'll read
i finally know what's going to happen in the next few chapters <333 I will have the next chapter of IA up by the end of Monday, hopefully I can push it out tomorrow though
@queenfromthe70s noooooo don’t die queen we need you
@Maddie497353 girl I think I'm dying
Girl wya
I'm taking Friday and Monday off work this weekend for my boyfriend's birthday, so hopefully I can finally get the next chapter of AI out and finally get over myself and all of my conflicting Claddie thoughts. Man, I wish I could write a hot Liar chapter rn. That would be fun. I'm in my feels.
@queenfromthe70s Affairs that is so Illicit, eitherway IM SEATED
YESSSSSS IM SO EXCITED
IA lmao, Affairs Illicit
found out recently that Freddie dies in many of his fan fics and now im so grateful that i havent finished one yet. why would you kill him in a fictional world too? :( i'm too scared to read them now lmao.
@WISHFUL-THINKER10 My stories all have him alive. We are writing fiction, why kill him off. Actually my new story, RESURRECTION, I brought him back in 2125. Check it out. Completely different.
@WISHFUL-THINKER10 it's called 'once before i go'! ^_^ ♥
@akindofdelicate What's the name of your story? I thought I read most of them.
You're not alone, I'm having trouble with the one I'm writing too.
I am having the hardest time with IA, besties. Idk where to go and how to get things moving. I'm mad at Freddie and idk how to move them past what he did, lmao. I'm so irritated. I have 50000 ideas which is worse than having none because what if I choose the wrong one and mess it all up?
I want to write so bad but idk what to do. It was so easy with Liar because I knew what had to happen from the start. Please can someone else write this book so I can read it and enjoy it and not get mad at myself
@flintblue oh you ate that up
@queenfromthe70s I love this book too and see so much potential in the characters...I understand the writing challenge after what Freddie did... but never underestimate the emotional power of a redemptive journey story ... Every reader can relate to feelings of guilt ...we've all done things that we regret, that's part of being human Yes Freddie is a flawed character but he can undergo a journey of emotional growth and maturity... As a reader, I want characters to evolve over time and be dynamic not static, it is more interesting ... As a writer, perhaps you can explore the reasons that perhaps made Freddie behave like that .. .Insecurities from his childhood ? He did have separation anxiety after being sent to boarding school. Being used by "friends" for his fame and money and having trust issues ? These are elements from the real man that you can incorporate . Freddie is a fascinating character to work with in fan fiction. I empathize with Clara's feelings and behaviour but technically what she is doing to Anthony isn't right either, but we can understand why she is acting that way ? So maybe focusing on having us understand why Freddie acted that way. Or maybe he and Clara can bond over being flawed human beings ? Maybe that is the commonality that brings them together ? Or maybe Clara ends up hurting Freddie herself or doing something that Freddie needs to forgive her for ? It is interesting when you can reverse polarity in a relationship ... I have total faith in your talent and trust your judgment.. and I am happy to help with suggestions (like a beta reader)... You laid the important groundwork of creating palpable physical and emotional chemistry between Freddie and Clara... (which isn't easy to do) .. and I want to see these characters interact ...Both in and out of the bedroom :)
I think they are destined to be together. Maybe they go to therapy to get past his betrayal. Then It could be the great romance story with loads of steamy sex!
What’s Clara’s physical description? I forget and idk how to imagine her
Thanks queen
@Maddie497353 @Maddie497353 I leave it a little up to interpretation, because I want people to have their own image of her, how they would like her to look. But in Liar she had long brown hair (a much lighter shade than Freddie's), she's average sized, just like a healthy body weight, full lips, brown eyes. She has a fringe. Only a little shorter than Freddie and Roger. Maybe like 5'7? In IA she's cut her hair down to her shoulders and she's lost a lot of weight because she's a miserable woman now. Someone said they picture her as Devyn Crimson and I think that's pretty accurate.