Shadow824k
Just finished reading the together forever series I have to admit you did a good job with it but I feel like it fell off after the second book in my personal opinion it got boring but all I know I wouldn’t have done nearly as good and I want you to know you should do more httyd fan fictions after you get done with beginning to fly and if you do I might have a new favourite book but right now my favourite is your first together forever book (I hope you take offence to me calling The rise of the light book boring)
queennightfurious
Nah! No offence! It was my very first fanfics so that’s to be expected! Tbh I’m thankful for the honest feedback, it means a lot. Plus, I agree with you, I just started throwing ideas at the wall and it ended up not very cohesive. Besides, Beginning to Fly was actually the whole reason the first series even happened, soooooo I accidentally ended up throwing all the set up in the last book… and added too many characters… oh well, ya live and you learn! I’m glad you liked the first book, though! Unfortunately, the beginning to fly series will likely be the last fanfics I do. I’ve started working on publishing an original work, which I’m very excited about and is shaping up much better than any fanfic I’ve ever written (yay for practice!). I have mentioned that I have some stranger things fanfics on ao3, but unless I get a huge motivation boost after the live action HTTYD movie comes out, there’s a near zero chance of me writing another one for this fandom… Again thank you for the feedback, it’s good to know and keep in mind before I finish my book!
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Balas