I'm not doing any hating I'm just telling you because as a reader seeing so many grammar mistakes in the first 4 sentences of your summary is off putting, just pass the autocorrect by your work. I repeat I don't mean to say that your work is bad, actually I love the way you started your story and it's reeeeeeeally good, just saying that you must correct the errors.
Thank you for reading it and writing such good stories.