@jwfangirlangel2 ok first and foremost the book is pretty good....I noticed though that a lot of your chapters tell when she's going to the next class orl to a place, you can do that but try and have her like for instance , if I was writing and I was having her going to the next class I'd write it like, "First class ended, thank heavens. I trotted my feet along the school hallway floors reaching my next destination," then end it however. Anthony thing is you can do it when you're done with the book or whenever but there is spelling errors,now that's nothing to get like to jumpy about because I'm sure my book has spelling errors or is missing a letter,so every once and a while I check up on my chapters to see.
Also in some of you're chapters,don't be afraid to have more crazy more drama, I noticed lots of people love drama....other than that for now it's a really good book and I would love to see more....and if you need anything else just let me know