So... I was in the middle of chapter 30 when I realised that I have changed the tone of Margaret's characters... And i only realised it because of a similar scene that I am writing
@Lynn1133 basic have the same drama as Stella and Kelly but the female main character goes on to date Evan Hawkins on and off again Kelly then Sam Carver and endgame Kelly
@k1yshiftss it took me 4 hours to write this chapter! I have rewrite it at least 5 time and still I don't like it . I might as well rewrite all chapters next weekend